Tuesday, 26 August 2014

Show not tell

In room 8 we are learning to show not tell .

  Here is a boring sentence.
The cat jumped over the fox
here is a better sentence
The big fat black cat pounced  over the  sleepy fuzzy brown fox.
The crow is black he ate 23 berry's and felt bad
The crow as black as night stole 23 berry's and felt terrible.

Tuesday, 19 August 2014

Cross county.

Cross country
I have been training  hard  to be fit . I train hard at school and home I ride my bike and at school  I run around the field as many times as I can.



Tuesday, 12 August 2014

Fractions

Fractions are important to learn. the numerator starts with nu right so the eazy way  is never under.so denominator starts with d for down. like for example 1/2 is a half

Tuesday, 29 July 2014

circuit poem

Circuit poem
circuits are when i ...Exercise to get fit for cross country
We move clockwise, there are many different stations.
I see sweaty bodies walking past me
 people zigzaging, back and  forth till  the whistle blows
we stop .
I can hear people huffing and puffing, music playing 
feet stomping the whistle blowing. 
I smell sweaty bodies, sand,  puddles and
fresh air.
I touch  the ground ,the wall .
circuits.